12/10/2011

Story Outlining

There's a story I've been outlining for a friend that takes many different elements from many different stories I've read over the year(s)…and a South Korean drama. Ever heard of 'Iris?' Yeah, that's what the plot for the beginning of the story is pretty much about. I found it repetitive while outlining it at first, so I skipped that whole section and began the next 'book.' I guess I'll have to outline here. So, from the beginning:


The main characters in the first part of the story start with a teenage girl named Sarah and a celebrity she adores named G-young. The beginning is a quick spoof on our video chatting. The two characters talk to each other through video chatting, staying in a friendly relationship. But when the media finds out that the celebrity has this little 'friend' of his by accident, G-young is forced to break the law to protect her, and the government, already furious about their cultural celebrity being used as a media tool, uses this opportunity to claim that G-young needs to be put down and brought to justice. After managing to meet each other, G-young and Sarah are forced to go into hiding, aided by an online guardian that saves them continuously as they attempt escape the government forces’ clutches. The story continues (and G-young and Sarah...sort of fall in love with each other?) until one day they venture underground to hide and discover a whole new (technically old) race living beneath the surface ('Artemis Fowl,' anyone?). At first, they are imprisoned and mistreated, for the fairies are very advanced and hate the humans for destroying their original home aboveground many eons ago, but soon, they discovered that the government had followed them and were making their way to the fairy capital, with the fairies having no way to stop it. But Sarah, after realizing that the fairies must survive to hold the balance of the earth in check, and already knowing the plans of the government and their usage of their multiverse techniques ('Timeline'), is enlisted by the fairies to help them stop the human invasion (Me thinks needs more detail). With G-young, she manages to freeze the invasion in time, effectively freezing all the communication systems aboveground as a result. 

It's not complete. But I'm not sure how to continue...suggestions please? Or if you want spoilers, I'll just say that G-young is gone afterwards. :3
I'll try to continue this part after my break starts. So for the rest of the week...Ciao!

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